Weber G wrote: ↑Tue Sep 07, 2021 8:25 am
So you did it into the temple. I thought this would be very difficult to go in?
- "advances" should simply be "advance"
- The comma after "Intruders" should be an exclamation point, with the following word "kill" being "Kill" (as written, it sounds like he's commanding the intruders to "kill them all")
- There is a period / full stop missing after "he shouts"
Thanks again for all the corrections! I made more failures in english grammar than in programming some new code... A big challenge!
The Sword of Zar would like a word with the so-called "greatest sword in the world". Doing 55 damage is hardly fantastic.
The balancing is very difficult. More than 90% of the monsters have below 100 hit points. I didn't want that 500 damage thing like in BT2. So I reduced the monster hit points and the weapon/ spell damage (more as in BT1). But I think the 'normal' fights are not that hard, right?
It was difficult to find, but I was able to figure out how to get in.
And honestly, you've accomplished what I could only dream of. English isn't your native language, so grammatical errors are bound to happen. I'm simply pointing them out as I find them.
Speaking of, on Temple level 3 the clue at 2N 16E should say "door" instead of "wall", since there's, like, a door there instead of a...wall.
The fight at 17N 2E on Temple level 3 has the following issues:
- "grumbles" is missing a full stop, and the comma should be on the other side of the quotation mark (i.e. "my own," he grumbles.)
- it's a bit silly having the Novices cast spells considering the square is anti-magic, making the fight probably a bit easier than you intended
What exactly am I meant to accomplish here? There's no item to get or anything, so....
You have to find the figurine of the goblin god in order to get access to the fortress of the goblin king. This figurine can be found in the room with the high priest.
- it's a bit silly having the Novices cast spells considering the square is anti-magic, making the fight probably a bit easier than you intended
The high priest decided to have the novices with him. It seems it was a bad choise he did...
Alright, I've mapped out the third level of the Temple, and I don't get it.
I'm really impressed! And thanks again for the corrections.
It seems the 'character-class-riddle' was not too difficult?
What exactly am I meant to accomplish here? There's no item to get or anything, so....
You have to find the figurine of the goblin god in order to get access to the fortress of the goblin king. This figurine can be found in the room with the high priest.
- it's a bit silly having the Novices cast spells considering the square is anti-magic, making the fight probably a bit easier than you intended
The high priest decided to have the novices with him. It seems it was a bad choise he did...
Alright, I've mapped out the third level of the Temple, and I don't get it.
I'm really impressed! And thanks again for the corrections.
It seems the 'character-class-riddle' was not too difficult?
Yeah well I've gone to every square in the dungeon level except for the ones blocked off by the chasm, and I found no figurine. I sort of figured that was what I needed, but I can't find it.
The hint at 15N, 0E on Fortress level 1 has a double space between "of and "the". A minor thing, but noticeable.
Also, the hint at 14N, 0E on the same level has two grammatical glitches:
- "hall if full"; should be "hall is full"
- "breath" should be "breathe"
And, just as an anecdote: A roughly 4900 square foot room full of rotten mushrooms would literally kill anyone in a matter of seconds, regardless of how many hit points they have.
